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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150925 IETF LC End Date: 20150924 IESG Telechat date: 20151001 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: my spell checker complains about subtending? (IMHO you should make it happy for the Abstract, i.e., change the Abstract wording (and only the Abstract wording)). - ToC page 2 and 6 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 3 page 4: Reachabilty -> Reachability - 4.1 page 6: may be different -> can be different (or any wording which doesn't use a RFC 2119 keyword even in lower case in an ambiguous way) - 4.6 page 8 (twice): SPsourceID -> SPSourceID (note I suppose the correct spelling is SPSourceID, anyway it can't be both SPsourceID and SPSourceID so the document must be fixed) - 6 page 9: please insert a blank line before. - 9.1 page 10 (twice): spurious breaks in 802.1* references - 10 page 11: add USA (BTW it should be formally US (ISO IS 3166 2 letters) but the UPU says USA and it is what the first (and only correct) entry has... Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
