Thanks for the review, Vijay. Answers in-line below.
> On Oct 14, 2015, at 7:32 PM, Jari Arkko <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Thanks for the review, Vijay. Good questions. Do the authors have an answer?
>
> Jari
>
> On 15 Oct 2015, at 00:49, Vijay K. Gurbani <[email protected]> wrote:
>
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>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>> you may receive.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15
>> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
>> Review Date: Oct-14-2015
>> IETF LC End Date: Not known
>> IESG Telechat date: Oct-15-2015
>>
>> This document is ready as a Proposed Standard with two minor nits.
>>
>> Major: 0
>> Minor: 2
>> Nits: 0
>>
>> Minor:
>> - S3.2,, first paragraph: "No message is ever sent from the monitoring
>> station to the monitored router."
>> You mean "No BMP message is ever sent from the monitoring station to
>> the monitored router."? I suspect that the monitoring station can send
>> TCP messages (SYN, ACK, etc.) to the monitored router in order to open
>> up the TCP connection, no?
Yes, of course. I would be happy for your suggested change to be made (insert
"BMP" into the sentence). I'll make this change when we issue a new version
(which it looks like we will, based on the security discusses).
>> - S3.2, last paragraph: "If the monitoring station intends to end or
>> restart BMP processing, it simply drops the connection, optionally
>> with a Termination message."
>> The monitoring station cannot send a (BMP?) message to the monitored
>> router, right? If so, I don't understand the utility of the
>> Termination method above
Wow, good catch, I have no idea what I was thinking. This could be resolved by
either dropping the final "optionally with a termination message" clause, or by
changing "monitoring station" to "router". I'm inclined to drop the offending
final clause and have tentatively made this change for the next version.
Regards,
– John
>> Thanks,
>>
>> - vijay
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