Robert, thank you for your review(s), and Rik, thanks for the edits.
Your proposed wording below works for me.

Jari

On 15 Dec 2015, at 21:20, Rik Ribbers <[email protected]> wrote:

> Robert,
> 
>> 
>> I also still think you would have a stronger document if it discussed the 
>> SHOULD NOT in the security section as I suggest below. I think you read that 
>> to be me suggesting you change it to MUST NOT. That was not the intent. I 
>> was asking you to add to the document _why_ it wasn't MUST NOT.
> 
> I’ll take that into consideration, as I have explained it in the response the 
> wording isn’t that difficult anymore. There are some more IESG review comment 
> on this section so I assume there will another version to before publication.
> 
> Current wording:
> 
> A server SHOULD NOT perform any transformation on data under server 
> management when processing a \<keyrelay:create\> command.
> 
> Proposed wording:
> 
> A server SHOULD NOT perform any transformation on data under server 
> management when processing a \<keyrelay:create\> command. The intent of this 
> command is to put DNSSEC key material on the poll queue of another client. To 
> make sure that this EPP extension is interoperable with the different server 
> policies that already have implemented EPP this extension it is not 
> classified as must not.
> 
> Please let me know what you think of this proposal (or send in text ;-))
> 
> Gr,
> Rik

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