Hi Elwyn, Thank you for the review. The nits will be fixed in the next version.
BR, Rachel > -----Original Message----- > From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Monday, December 14, 2015 9:50 PM > To: General area reviewing team; > [email protected] > Subject: Gen-art LC/telechat review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-video-lc-05 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-video-lc-05 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2015/12/14 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-04 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) 2015-12-17 > > Summary: Ready with nits, primarily a number of acronyms needing expansion. > > Major issues: > None > > Minor issues: > None > > Nits/editorial comments: > Abstract: Need to expand RTCP (to RTP Control Protocol) and XR (Extended > Reports). > > s1, para 2: Need to expand QoE. > > s1.2: s/RTP Monitoring Architectures [RFC6792]/RTP Monitoring Framework > [RFC6792]/ > > s1.3: > OLD > These metrics are applicable to video applications the video > component of Audio/Video applications using RTP and applying packet > loss concealment mechanisms which are incorporated into the receiving > endpoint to mitigate the impact of network impairments on QoE. > NEW: > These metrics are applicable to video applications and the video > component of Audio/Video applications using RTP that apply packet > loss concealment mechanisms incorporated into the receiving > endpoint to mitigate the impact of network impairments on QoE. > END > > s1.3: Need to expand IPTV. > > s3, item b: Need to expand IDR; > s/Using inter-frame extrapolation/Using the > inter-frame extrapolation/ > > s3, item d: s/so that receiver/so that the receiver/ > > s3, last para: s/methods slightly different/methods to be slightly different/ > > s4, para 1: Need to expand SSRC. > > s4, duration fields: It would useful to insert a reference to the place where > the RTP timestamp units are defined. > > s7.1: should refer back to s4 for the definition of VLC. > > s7.2: should refer back to s5 for the definition of video-loss-concealment. > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
