2985 is a normative reference in 5750 which is standards track so I think we can safely claim precedent and I can put 2985 in the downref registry if nobody objects.
Cheers, S. On 11/03/16 18:05, Elwyn Davies wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-wallace-est-alt-challenge-05.txt > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2016/03/11 > IETF LC End Date: 2016/03/09 > IESG Telechat date: 2016/03/17 > > Summary: Ready with minor nits and a (new) downref issue for RFC 2985 > (importation of PKCS #9). Thanks for addressing my comments on -04 at > last call. > > Major issues: > None > > Minor issues: > Downref issue: idnits identifies three downref issues: > - RFC 5912 was in the previous version and is in the downref registry > already, so needn't concern us. > - RFC 2985 has been moved from Informative in -04 to Normative in -05. > Since RFC 2985 is a reproduction of a a external standard, I don't think > there should be any issue here, but the reference probably ought to be > normative, and should have been called out in the last call - apologies > for failing to point this out in my LC review. > -RFC 7107 is only used to flag the definition of the SMI Security for > S/MIME Attributes registry. I think this could safely be taken as > informative. > > Thus the only real issue is with RFC 2985. > > Nits/editorial comments: > Abstract: Must not have references s/[RFC2985]/(RFC 2985)/ > > s3: Currently s3.1 states in the text that the maximum length of the > DirectoryString is 255. ss3.2 and 3.3 have this defined in the ASN.1 > but not in the text. It would make things consistent if this was stated > in para 2 of s3: > s/defined as a DirectoryString/defined as a DirectoryString with maximum > length 255/ > > s4, last para: s/(see [RFC7030], s3.7 second paragraph)/(see Section 3.7 > of [RFC3070])/ >
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Description: S/MIME Cryptographic Signature
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