Thank you Matt! I think that these idnits and editorial comments can be handled by the authors and the RFC editor while producing the final version of the document before official publication.
Best Regards, Lionel > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Matt Miller (mamille2) [mailto:[email protected]] > Envoyé : mercredi 23 mars 2016 23:49 > À : [email protected] > Cc : [email protected] > Objet : Review of draft-ietf-radext-bigger-packets-05 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >. > > Document: draft-ietf-radext-bigger-packets-05 > Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller > Review Date: 2016-03-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-03-23 > IESG Telechat date: N/A > > Summary: > > This document is basically ready for publication as an Experimental RFC, but > has nits that should be fixed before publication. > > Major issues: NONE > > Minor issues: NONE > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * idnits complains about the abstract not directly say this document updates > RFC 6613 and RFC 6614; the document does say "extends" > instead, which seems fine to me. > > * idnits is complaining Copyright years are not matching; I assume this will > be > fixed with the next update if not the RFC Editor > > * idnits is complaining that in Section 3. "Forward and backward > Compatibility", there is an instance of "SHOULD not" that ought to be > "SHOULD NOT". > > * idnits is complaining about "odd spacing" in Section 6. > "IANA Considerations" -- "containing maximum response" ought to be > "containing maximum response" > > * In Section 2. "Changes to Packet Processing", 'cloing' should be 'closing' > in > "cloing the TCP connection". > > * In Section 3. "Forward and backward Compatibility", the "backwward" in > the section title isn't capitalized while the other significant words are. > > > -- > - m&m > > Matt Miller > Cisco Systems, Inc. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
