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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2016-04-18
IETF LC End Date: 2016-04-26
IESG Telechat date: 2016-05-05
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments: Two clarifications, one typo:
2.1:
OLD
Type - S-BFD Discriminator TLV Type
NEW
Type - S-BFD Discriminator TLV Type (TBD [to be filled in by IANA])
END
OLD
Length - Total length of the discriminator (Value field) in octets,
not including the optional padding. The Length is a multiple of 4
octets, and consequently specifies how many Discriminators are
included in the TLV.
NEW
Length - Total length of the discriminator(s) that appear in the
Value field, in octets. Each discriminator is 4 octets, so the
Length
is 4 times the number of Discriminators included in the TLV. There
is
no optional padding for this field.
END
2.2:
OLD
Note that the S-BFD session may be required to pan multiple areas
NEW
Note that the S-BFD session may be required to span multiple areas
END
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Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/>
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