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Document: draft-ietf-l2tpext-sbfd-discriminator-05.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/04/27
IETF LC End Date: 2016/04/05
IESG Telechat date: 2016/05/05
Summary: Ready. Thanks for fixing the nits and issue from my last call
review.
NOTE: I noted that the related document,
draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04 that is also on the telechat
agenda, provides for the transmission of multiple discriminators in the
same way as this document does for l2tp. The words in the OSPF version
match as far as declaring decisions as to what multiple discriminators
are used for to be out of scope. However, unlike the l2tp document, the
ospf document does not indicate what the discriminator is intended to be
associated with if there is only one. It would be desirable to make the
documents consistent.
This note also applies to draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02 which is
already in the RFC Editor queue.
The out of scope comment and indication of what a single discriminator
would be used for also needs to be added to
draft-zhuang-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions which is still in progress.
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