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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-09
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2016/3/29
IETF LC End Date: 2016/4/12
IESG Telechat date: 2016/5/5

Summary: Ready

The document is well written and complete, but requires a good understanding of 
BFD (RFC 5880) and of the use-cases (draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case) 
document. I raised three (no show-stopper) issues in my first review. Two of 
them let to clarification and editorial improvements in the text. The third one 
was clarified in the mail exchange with the authors and I agree that no change 
is acceptable.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1.

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