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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-msid-13 Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller Review Date: 2016-05-24 IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-24 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard once some minor editorial nits are address. Major issues: NONE Minor issues: NONE Nits/editorial comments: * idnits is complaining that something smells of code that isn't bounded. However, I think it is clear that the "suspicious text" is the detailed SDP example, and is already clearly noted as such. * idnits warns of a number of outdated references, which I assume will be updated with the next revision of this document or by the RFC Editor: - draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-mux-attributes-02 - draft-ietf-rtcweb-jsep-07 - draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-07 - draft-ietf-rtcweb-overview-10 * In Section 1.1. "Structure Of This Document", there is a spacing issue in "WebRTC[I-D.ietf-rtcweb-overview] ." * In Section 2. "The Msid Mechanism", there is an extra "." in "... defined in [W3C.WD-webrtc-20150210]., and to ...". * In Section 3.1. "Handling of non-signalled tracks", some of the phrasing in the third paragraph seems awkward to me. Might I suggest the following instead: When MSID is used, the only time this can happen is when, after the initial negotiation, a negotiation is performed where the answerer adds a MediaStreamTrack to an already established connection and starts sending data before the answer is received by the offerer. For initial negotiation, packets won't flow until the ICE candidates and fingerprints have been exchanged, so this is not an issue. * Also in Section 3.1. "Handling of non-signalled tracks", I think the sentence after the bullet list ought to be split in two between "entered" and "If": The process above may involve a considerable amount of buffering before the stable state is entered. If the implementation wishes to limit this buffering, it MUST signal to the user that media has been discarded.
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