Thanks, all! Jari
On 27 May 2016, at 01:07, Joel Halpern <[email protected]> wrote: > This revision (-01) represents a reasonable effort to address my concerns. > My thanks to the author. > > The document is ready for publication as a BCP > > Yours, > Joel M. Halpern > > On 4/22/16 12:10 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-sheffer-rfc6982bis-00 >> Improving Awareness of Running Code: The Implementation >> Status Section >> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern >> Review Date: 22-April-2016 >> IETF LC End Date: 13-May-2016 >> IESG Telechat date: (if known) >> >> Summary: >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> The introduction describes RFC1264 as requiring at least one >> implementation. The general requirement in RFC 1264 is multiple >> implementations, at least two independent. While it is a minor issue, >> this document should characterize RFC 1264 more carefully. >> >> In the Alternative Formats section, it strikes me that there is an >> alternative that is sometimes useful that is de-emphasised by the text >> as written. If there has been significant insight gained from the >> implementations, that may be useful to capture in a longer-lived >> context. In that case, an RFC describing implementation may still be >> useful. I would appreciate it if the authors would consider adding a >> short paragraph to this effect. >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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