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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2016-06-27
IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-27
IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 19]:
"
Property: pattern
Description: A pattern for string matching. The pattern can
contain the wildcards * and ?, where * matches any sequence of
characters (including the empty string) and ? matches exactly
one character. The three literals $, * and ? should be escaped
as $$, $* and $?. All other characters are treated as literals.
"
Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the one
character match?
-[Page 20], section 4.1.6,
"to evaulate"--typo-->"to evaluate"
"is specifed"--typo-->"is specified"
-[Page 24], section 4.2.1.1
"objecct,"--typo-->"object,"
-[Page 50-54], sections 7.1.1 to 7.1.20
"capabilitiy"--typo?-->"capability" (many times)
-General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"?
Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com
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