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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2016-08-26 IETF LC End Date: 2016-07-06 IESG Telechat date: 2016-09-01 Summary: Ready with issues -------- Comment: After my Last Call review I expected to see a new version, -------- but that hasn't happened yet. Minor issue: ------------ "This document provides guidance on the deployment of..." I understand that the AD suggested the standards track, but the document reads more like a BCP than a Proposed Standard to me. As I read through the document, it describes alternatives and differing scenarios. Nits: ----- ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 1813 This reference was added in the -09 version. I believe it should be Informative instead of Normative. ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1831 (Obsoleted by RFC 5531) This needs to be fixed. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
