Ruediger, Thanks and regards, Brian
On 29/08/2016 19:19, [email protected] wrote: > Hi Brian, > > thanks. I've submitted a new version without the nits (I applied "RFC nnnn" > notation for non-reference mentions). > > Regards, > > Ruediger > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon/ > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-09 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-09 > > > -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- > Von: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:[email protected]] > Gesendet: Montag, 29. August 2016 06:47 > An: [email protected]; General Area Review Team > Betreff: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2016-08-29 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-09-08 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: Ready with nits > -------- > > Comments: > --------- > > 1. I was co-chair of the original diffserv WG, and I have tracked this draft > throughout its life and influenced some of its content. I have re-read it > carefully for this review. > > 2. I believe it is correctly positioned as Informational. It might become a > candidate for BCP with deployment experience. > > Nits: > ----- > > Section 4 mentions RFC2575, certainly a typo for RFC2475. > > Non-reference mentions of RFCs are inconsistent, e.g. both "RFC4594" and > "RFC 4594" occur. > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
