Many thanks for the review, Joel! Jari
On 26 Aug 2016, at 03:55, Joel Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote: > This document is still ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > (I think I even see why the reference in section 3.3 is point to 2.1.) > > Yours, > Joel > > On 7/5/16 6:26 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt >> Parallel NFS (pNFS) SCSI Layout >> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern >> Review Date: 5-July-2016 >> IETF LC End Date: 12-July-2016 >> IESG Telechat date: N/A >> >> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. >> >> The reviewer notes that he fouund the document quite readable, but >> nonetheless made no effort to review the storage details. >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> It seems likely that the cross-reference in section 3.3 paragraph 1 >> which points to section 2.1 is actually intended to point to section 3.1 >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> Gen-art@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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