Russ, Many thanks for your reviews, including this one. I plan to ballot no-objection for this draft.
Some further comments inline: > Summary: Ready > > Major Concerns: None > > Minor Concerns: > > I think it would be useful to move the last paragraph in Section 3.3 > into a Privacy Considerations section. This would also eliminate the > need for a pointer at the beginning of the Security Considerations. Did the authors note this potential suggestion? (I’m fine either way.) I looked at the document and found it to be ok. Did everyone notice that the two privacy paragraphs from Section 4 were removed? I think they could be removed safely, but just making an observation. Jari
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