Hi Vijay, Thanks for your review. We’ve added a “:” to the end of each term being defined.
Brian > On Oct 27, 2016, at 6:11 AM, Vijay K.Gurbani > <[email protected]> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: Oct-27-2016 > IETF LC End Date: Unknown > IESG Telechat date: Oct-27-2016 > > This document is ready as an Proposed Standard. > > Major: 0 > Minor: 0 > Nits: 1 > > Nits: > 1/ S1.2: Perhaps a ':' or a '-' to delimit the term being defined and > the definition itself. > > Thanks, > > - vijay > -- > Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks > 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) > Email: [email protected] / [email protected] > Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq -- Brian Weis Security, CSG, Cisco Systems Telephone: +1 408 526 4796 Email: [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
