> Summary: Ready with nits. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits/editorial comments: > - S1: s/source of Media, such as from one or more Capture > Devices./source of Media from one or more Capture Devices./ > - S1: s/SIP offer answer/SIP Offer/Answer model/ > - S1: s/recommendations, for the CLUE architecture, about > how/recommendations for the CLUE architecture on how/ > - S4: s/have main and slides video sources can/have a primary video > source and a slide video source can/ > - S5: s/CaptureIDis/CaptureID is/
Thanks for your review, Vijay! Authors, I didn’t see changes related to these observations in the new document versions… were the comments missed? While they were small editorial comments, they all made sense to me at least ;-) I have balloted no-objection for this document on tomorrow’s IESG telechat. Jari
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