Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-08 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2017-02-10 IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31 IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16 Summary: Ready with Nits A couple of nits that I mentioned in my earlier review that you might want to address, but none of them are essential. (You may have decided that I was wrong; that's OK too.) I didn't bother Cc'ing the IETF list on this, since they're both very minor. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 3.1: A set of non-overlapping available frequency ranges MUST be disseminated in order to allow efficient resource management of flexi-grid DWDM links and RSA procedures which are described in Section 4.8 of [RFC7698]. Those MUSTs look weird to me. I think instead of "MUST be" you mean "are", since it doesn't look like an implementation really has a choice here. 3.2: Hence, in order to support all possible applications and implementations the following information should be advertised for a flexi-grid DWDM link: Is that "should" in there meant to be normative? That is, do bad things happen if I don't advertise one of those items? Or do you just mean "the following information is advertised..."? _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
