Dear Meral, Based on you comments, a new version of this draft was generated and submitted. Thank you so much for pushing this work. BR, Zhiwei
----------------------- A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06.txt has been successfully submitted by Zhiwei Yan and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum Revision: 06 Title: Home Network Prefix Renumbering in PMIPv6 Document date: 2017-02-15 Group: dmm Pages: 9 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06 Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06 Abstract: In the basic Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) specification, a Mobile Node (MN) is assigned with a Home Network Prefix (HNP) during its initial attachment and the MN configures its Home Address (HoA) with the HNP. During the movement of the MN, the HNP remains unchanged to keep ongoing communications associated with the HoA. However, the current PMIPv6 specification does not specify related operations when an HNP renumbering has happened (e.g. due to change of service provider, change of site topology, etc.). In this document, a solution to support the HNP renumbering is proposed, as an update of the PMIPv6 specification. 发件人： Meral Shirazipour 发送时间： 2017-02-11 06:04:41 收件人： [email protected]; [email protected] 抄送： 主题： Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-05 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-02-10 IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-10 IESG Telechat date: - Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -Abstract: Current: "However, the current PMIPv6 specification does not specify related operations when an HNP renumbering is happened.". Suggestion for more clarity: "However, the current PMIPv6 specification does not specify related operations when an HNP renumbering has happened (e.g. due to change of service provider, change of site topology, etc.).". -[Page 3], "to an MAG"---->"to a MAG" -[Page 7], "the proceduer"--->"the procedure" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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