Francis, thanks a lot for your review. Francesca
> -----Original Message----- > From: Francis Dupont [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: den 15 februari 2017 13:48 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20170210 > IETF LC End Date: 20170214 > IESG Telechat date: 20170224 > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 1 and 3 page 3 (title): Benefitting -> Benefiting > > - 3 page 3 (suggest): CoRE etc, -> CoRE, etc, > > - 4 page 3: reading the document I had a question about the "no need > ... to specify the internal structure" but the reason became clear > the next page. So I have no concern about this. > > Regards > > [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
