Thank you Roni for the review.
Yours,
Daniel

On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 6:57 AM, Roni Even <[email protected]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-curdle-cms-ecdh-new-curves-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-05-25
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-28
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> In general it was easy to read and follow.  Maybe it will be good to
> repeat in section 3.2 the definition of KeyAgreeRecipientInfo . This
> is done is section 2 for ECC-CMS-SharedInfo but it is not crucial.
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> 1. There is no ToC
> 2. In section 2.2 fourth paragraph "is used two places" - "in two .."
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