Vijay, thank you for your review. Roni, thanks for agreeing to make the changes. I have entered a Yes ballot position on this document.
Alissa > On May 11, 2017, at 2:35 AM, Roni Even <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Vijay, > Thanks, I will fix these two nits > Roni > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Vijay Gurbani [mailto:[email protected]] >> Sent: יום ד 10 מאי 2017 21:32 >> To: [email protected] >> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] >> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11 >> >> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11 >> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani >> Review Date: 2017-05-10 >> IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-20 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: Ready with nits. >> >> Major issues: 0 >> >> Minor issues: 0 >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> - S5: s/An example (this is only an example), where/An example where/ >> (I suspect that the reader will get the idea that this is only an >> example. There are a couple of occurrence of this in S5.) >> >> - S6: s/When doing SDP Offer/When engaging in SDP Offer/ >> >> Thanks! >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
