Hi Paul, Thanks for the review. I'll fix references.
Regards, Christer -----Original Message----- From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: 28 July 2017 04:01 To: [email protected] Cc: General Area Review Team <[email protected]>; IETF MMUSIC WG <[email protected]> Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2017-07-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-15 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. (These nits were reported by IdNits. I apologize for not noticing these during my Last Call review.) Issues: Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 (1) NIT: Unused Reference: 'RFC5245' is defined on line 1065, but no explicit reference was found in the text This is now redundant because all the references in the text have been changed to draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis. (2) NIT: Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4572 This is now obsolete because it has been replaced by RFC8122. This draft should now be referencing that. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
