Hi Pete, thanks for the review. I agree that at least the other RFCs/drafts should be mentioned as well and have put that in the comment for my ballot position.
Mirja > Am 21.08.2017 um 17:40 schrieb Pete Resnick <[email protected]>: > > Reviewer: Pete Resnick > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06 > Reviewer: Pete Resnick > Review Date: 2017-08-21 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-28 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31 > > Summary: Almost Ready > > The content of this document is fine. However, I think the IANA registry stuff > is not ready. > > Major issues: > > I think the registrations other than for Endpoint and Color are incorrect and > should not be in this document. Certainly the "Reference" field for 1, 2, 5, > 6, > and 7 should not be "This document", given that the syntax and semantics for > these values are defined in other documents. I also think that having things > in > this registry which are also used by the BGP registry is asking for trouble: > You wouldn't want the references for the two registries to get out of sync. > This seems like a mess to me. Would it be possible for IANA to simply rename > the "BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs" registry to "BGP and OSPF > Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs", and share the registry between the > two protocols? Then have this (and other) document(s) add values to that > registry. That way, the documents that actually define the codepoints can be > put into the registry. > > Minor issues: > > None. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > In section 7.1, please add: > > [RFC Editor: Please replace "TBD1" in section 3 with the registry value > allocated by IANA, and remove this note]. > > That will save them from hunting. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
