Thank you. All of these are addressed in the next iteration of the draft which will be posted with all the other IESG comments.
-----Original Message----- From: mile [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Kathleen Moriarty Sent: Friday, August 25, 2017 9:13 PM To: Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]>; MILE IETF <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: [mile] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10 Thank you for the review and nits! Kathleen On Tue, Aug 22, 2017 at 7:08 PM, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like > any other last call comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10 > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > > Review Date: 2017-08-22 > > IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-25 > > IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31 > > > > > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but > I have comments. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -[Page 3], "should chose"---->"should choose" > > -[Page 4], "language an the"---->"language and the" > > -[Page 5], "that an successful"---->"that a successful" > > -[Page 6], "can cary greatly"---->"can caryy greatly" > > -[Page 8], "excercise"---->"exercise" > > -[Page 8],"compteting"---->"competing" > > > > > > Best Regards, > > Meral > > --- > > Meral Shirazipour > > Ericsson > > Research > > www.ericsson.com -- Best regards, Kathleen _______________________________________________ mile mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mile _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
