Susan,
Thanks for your attention to these.
Thanks,
Paul
On 11/15/17 1:31 AM, Susan Hares wrote:
Paul:
The I2RS WG appreciated your comments on January 13, 2017. Your
questions and others lead to revisions.
On your minor points:
1)unnumbered – is a term commonly used in the configuration of routers.
The authors and WG felt a change to something else would confuse those
used to configuring routers.
2)The example for ISIS in Section 6.2 (from version 8) was removed to
reduce the amount of detail
The nit “augments general network” was not caught by version 12. The
change will be caught in version 13.
Old:/augments general network topology model/ to
New:/augments the general network topology model/
Susan Hares
Document shepherd
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