On 2/11/18 5:54 AM, Roni Even wrote:
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-ice-trickle-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-02-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> In appendix B third paragraph "When performing full trickle, a full ICE
> implementation could conveying the initial ICE description or response thereto
> ..."  change to "convey"

Noted and fixed under source control:

https://github.com/ice-wg/trickle/commit/3c86705bd211e1b5bc2c8f7fc199ec2c2db7595d#diff-f7ced034e08b14404c7832d8f5f19567

Thanks for the review!

Peter


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