On 2/11/18 5:54 AM, Roni Even wrote: > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-ice-trickle-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2018-02-11 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08 > > Summary: > The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > In appendix B third paragraph "When performing full trickle, a full ICE > implementation could conveying the initial ICE description or response thereto > ..." change to "convey"
Noted and fixed under source control: https://github.com/ice-wg/trickle/commit/3c86705bd211e1b5bc2c8f7fc199ec2c2db7595d#diff-f7ced034e08b14404c7832d8f5f19567 Thanks for the review! Peter
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