Joel, thanks for your review. I suspect the controls you’re contemplating are in fact solution-dependent.
I entered a Yes ballot - glad to see this bit of work concluding. Alissa > On Feb 6, 2018, at 7:02 PM, Joel Halpern <[email protected]> wrote: > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03 > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2018-02-06 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-15 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22 > > Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > I presume that the lack of description on how to apply controls to > semi-restricted or restricted data, particulalry in the distributed data > store case, is deliberate? I presume that the WG intent is that this is a > topic to be dealt with in the solutions, not the problem statement and > framework? Things are fine if that is the intent. If the WG views this as > an actual useful description of how to handle those aspects, then I would > ask for more descriptions. > > Nits/editorial comments: > Editorial: In the definition of Credential Authority the text uses the > phrase "one of more" when I am pretty sure the intent is "one or more". > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
