Stewart, thanks for your reviews of this document. Huaimo, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Mar 5, 2018, at 4:44 PM, Huaimo Chen <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Steward, > > Thank you very much for your time and your valuable comments. > We have updated the document to address the nits according to your > suggestions. > > Best Regards, > Huaimo > -----Original Message----- > From: Stewart Bryant [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Monday, March 05, 2018 2:32 PM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected] > Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-egress-protection-14 > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-egress-protection-?? > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2018-03-05 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-27 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08 > > Summary: This is much improved since the earlier version I reviewed. > > I do have a concern about the use of the term "egress" when I think that it > should be "egress node" or some such other network object. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > The authors often use the term egress on its own when I think they mean > egress PE or egress node or egress LSR. If my English concern is correct, > this should be addressed before this goes to the RFC Editor else Auth48 will > be a painful process for all concerned. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
