Hi, Suresh and draft authors.
Sorry for my inaction on checking the updates.
I have now run through the changes (phew!) and think you are almost good to go. 
There are a couple of minor typos and a query about RFC 8213.  Otherwise, 
thanks for addressing most of my issues/suggestions - I am gennerally happy 
with the outcome.
Last few thoughts:
s18.1: s/facility/facilitate/
s19.4, next to last para: s/insert an option to/insert an option into/
s20.3, para 2: >  This method MUST be supported by all protocols.This seems to 
be rather presumptious!  
s20.3, para 3: s/a message with RDM field/a message with the RDM field/
s21.22, 9th para after Table 36: s/The client SHOULD NOT send an IA Prefix 
option with 0/The client SHOULD NOT send an IAPrefix option with 0/ [space 
s20.1/s27.2:  Keeping RFC 8213 as a separate item is fair enough, but I still 
feel it should be normative
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-------- Original message --------From: Suresh Krishnan <sur...@kaloom.com> 
Date: 06/04/2018  04:15  (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com> 
Subject: Your Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis 
Hi Elwyn,
  As I spoke to you during IETF week, the authors of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis 
have addressed your review comments with text changes as well as explanations 
in case there are no text changes. Can you take a quick look at the latest rev 
to see if there are any open issues? I would like to get this draft approved by 
the end of this week. The latest draft is here


The issues and the changes are tracked here



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