Francis, thanks for the review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa
> On Oct 9, 2017, at 9:13 AM, Francis Dupont <[email protected]> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20171002 > IETF LC End Date: 20171009 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 2 and 11 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments > > - 2 page 3: there is now a RFC updating 2119 to solve the lower case > keyword issue. I don't know if there is a policy about this, e.g., > improving the standard 2119 reference text. I'll ask to the gen-art. > > - 3 page 4: "a small number of implementations may still require" > for instance of (not ambiguous) use of a 2119 keyword in lower case > (so now a priori in its English language meaning). > > Regards > > [email protected] > > PS: BTW I know this draft before being assigned as its gen-art reviewer, > I even pulled a request to define these OIDs in Botan... > So thanks to have done that! > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
