Linda, thanks for your review. Dirk, thanks for your response. Vary is defined in RFC 7231 I think, so it would be trivial to add a citation, but agree that it is not strictly necessary.
I have entered a DISCUSS ballot to chat about some issues in Sec 2.1. Alissa > On May 3, 2018, at 10:54 PM, Dirk Balfanz <[email protected]> wrote: > > The Vary response header refers to this HTTP header: > https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/Vary > <https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/Vary> > > I think an additional definition/citation is unnecessary, as other basic > concepts of HTTP are also left undefined/uncited in the spec.. > > Please let me know if that's not acceptable, and I'll look for a way to add a > citation. > > Thank, > > Dirk. > > > On Thu, May 3, 2018 at 1:35 PM Linda Dunbar <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. > > Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14 > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review Date: 2018-05-03 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 > > Summary: > The document is written very clear, easy to understand, and content is > complete. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Section 2 Page 4: > Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following sentence? > If > yes, need to provide the definition as I don't see it being defined anywhere > "MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.." > > thank you. > > Linda dunbar > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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