Russ, thanks for your review. Lou, thanks for the updates. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Jun 5, 2018, at 10:03 AM, Lou Berger <lber...@labn.net> wrote: > > Hi Russ, > > Thanks for the comments. Please take a look at > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-16 and let us know > if this version does *not* address your issues. > > Thanks, > > Lou > > (doc Shepherd) > > >> On 5/17/2018 4:18 PM, Russ Housley wrote: >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review result: Not Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-15 >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review Date: 2018-05-17 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-30 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-06-07 >> >> Summary: Not Ready >> >> Major Concerns: >> >> See https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines. The >> Security Considerations section MUST follow the template provided on >> that web page, but it is not followed by this document. >> >> Note that [RFC5246], [RFC6241], [RFC6242], [RFC6536], and [RFC8040] >> are required to be normative references by those guidelines. None of >> these appear in the references. >> >> >> Minor Concerns: >> >> Section 1.1: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174 >> in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: >> >> The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", >> "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and >> "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP >> 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all >> capitals, as shown here. >> >> Section 1.1: Please add a reference to RFC 7926. >> >> >> Nits: >> >> Please pick one spelling (YANG vs. Yang) and use it throughout the >> document. >> >> The TOC contains several lines where the heading goes past the column >> of page numbers. Reformatting would make this much easier to read. >> >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
