Hi Peter, 
Thanks for thoroughly reviewing this document again and finding the nits. I 
incorporated all your comments other than adding "positive" as while it is more 
precise, it reads better without it and we don't want to imply that a TLV 
length could ever be negative. See attached diff. 
Thanks,
Acee 

On 6/13/18, 3:04 AM, "Peter Yee" <[email protected]> wrote:

    Reviewer: Peter Yee
    Review result: Ready with Nits
    
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    Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21
    Reviewer: Peter Yee
    Review Date: 2018-06-12
    IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-12
    IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
    
    Summary: This document is ready for publication, although there are a few 
nits
    that should be corrected prior to publication.  I am not a routing expert, 
so I
    cannot vouch for the correctness of this specification, but it otherwise
    appears consistent and reflect s the many iterations it has undergone.
    
    Major issues: None.
    
    Minor issues: None
    
    Nits/editorial comments:
    
    General:
    
    Expand uncommon acronyms on first use.  (See:
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt.).  Acronyms need
    expansion include: AS, ECMP, and EBGP.
    
    Specific:
    
    Page 3, 7th paragraph, last sentence: actually, this isn’t a complete 
sentence.
     I’m not sure what you wanted to do with the fragment.
    
    Page 5, 2nd full paragraph, last sentence: change “prefix-SID” to “BGP
    Prefix-SID” to make usage in the remainder of the document.
    
    Page 7, Section 3.2, 2nd bullet item: insert “positive” before “multiple”.
    
    Page 9, last paragraph, 1st sentence: delete “to”.
    
    Page 12, 1st paragraph after the (unlabeled) Value/Type/Reference table, 
last
    sentence: insert “ Prefix” before “-SID”.
    
    Page 12, 2nd paragraph after the (unlabeled) Value/Type/Reference table, 
last
    sentence: insert “ Prefix” before “-SID”.
    
    

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        Expires: November 30, 2018                                 Cisco 
Systems                Expires: December 15, 2018                               
  Cisco Systems        
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                     Segment Routing Prefix SID extensions for BGP              
             Segment Routing Prefix SID extensions for BGP      
                            draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21                    
            draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-22    
                                
        Abstract                Abstract        
                                
           The Segment Routing (SR) architecture allows a node to steer a 
packet                   The Segment Routing (SR) architecture allows a node to 
steer a packet        
           flow through any topological path and service chain by leveraging    
           flow through any topological path and service chain by leveraging    
           source routing.  The ingress node prepends an SR header to a packet  
           source routing.  The ingress node prepends an SR header to a packet  
           containing a set of segment identifiers (SID).  Each SID represents 
a                   containing a set of segment identifiers (SID).  Each SID 
represents a        
           topological or a service-based instruction.  Per-flow state is       
           topological or a service-based instruction.  Per-flow state is       
           maintained only on the ingress node of the SR domain.  An SR domain  
           maintained only on the ingress node of the SR domain.  An SR domain  
           is defined as a single administrative domain for global SID          
   is defined as a single administrative domain for global SID  
                                
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        1.  Introduction                1.  Introduction        
                                
           The Segment Routing (SR) architecture leverages the source routing   
           The Segment Routing (SR) architecture leverages the source routing   
           paradigm.  A group of inter-connected nodes that use SR forms an SR  
           paradigm.  A group of inter-connected nodes that use SR forms an SR  
           domain.  A segment represents either a topological instruction such  
           domain.  A segment represents either a topological instruction such  
           as "go to prefix P following shortest path" or a service 
instruction.                   as "go to prefix P following shortest path" or a 
service instruction.        
           Other types of segments may be defined in the future.                
   Other types of segments may be defined in the future.        
                                
           A segment is identified through a Segment Identifier (SID).  An SR   
           A segment is identified through a Segment Identifier (SID).  An SR   
           domain is defined as a single administrative domain for global SID   
           domain is defined as a single administrative domain for global SID   
           assignment.  It may be comprised of a single AS or multiple ASes     
           assignment.  It may be comprised of a single Autonomous System (AS)  
           under consolidated global SID administration.  Typically, the 
ingress                   or multiple ASes under consolidated global SID 
administration.       
           node of the SR domain prepends an SR header containing segments      
           Typically, the ingress node of the SR domain prepends an SR header   
           identifiers (SIDs) to an incoming packet.               containing 
segments identifiers (SIDs) to an incoming packet.        
                                
           As described in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], when SR is 
applied                   As described in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], 
when SR is applied        
           to the MPLS dataplane ([I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls]), the  
           to the MPLS dataplane ([I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls]), the  
           SID consists of a label.                SID consists of a label.     
                                
           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing] also describes how segment routing 
           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing] also describes how segment routing 
           can be applied to an IPv6 dataplane (SRv6) using an IPv6 routing     
           can be applied to an IPv6 dataplane (SRv6) using an IPv6 routing     
           header containing a stack of SR SIDs encoded as IPv6 addresses       
           header containing a stack of SR SIDs encoded as IPv6 addresses       
           [I-D.ietf-6man-segment-routing-header].  The applicability and       
           [I-D.ietf-6man-segment-routing-header].  The applicability and       
           support for Segment Routing over IPv6 is beyond the scope of this    
           support for Segment Routing over IPv6 is beyond the scope of this    
           document.               document.    
                                
           A BGP-Prefix Segment (and its BGP Prefix-SID) is a BGP segment       
           A BGP-Prefix Segment (and its BGP Prefix-SID) is a BGP segment       
           attached to a BGP prefix.  A BGP Prefix-SID is always a global SID   
           attached to a BGP prefix.  A BGP Prefix-SID is always a global SID   
           ([I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing]) within the SR/BGP domain (i.e.,  
           ([I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing]) within the SR/BGP domain (i.e.,  
           the set of Autonomous Systems under a common administration and      
           the set of Autonomous Systems under a common administration and      
           control and where SR is used) and identifies an instruction to       
           control and where SR is used) and identifies an instruction to       
           forward the packet over the ECMP-aware best-path computed by BGP to  
           forward the packet over the Equal-Cost Multi-Path (ECMP) best-path   
           the related prefix.  The BGP Prefix-SID is the identifier of the BGP 
           computed by BGP to the related prefix.  The BGP Prefix-SID is the    
           prefix segment.  In this document, we always refer to the BGP 
segment                   identifier of the BGP prefix segment.  In this 
document, we always   
           by the BGP Prefix-SID.                  refer to the BGP segment by 
the BGP Prefix-SID.      
                                
           This document describes the BGP extension to signal the BGP Prefix-  
           This document describes the BGP extension to signal the BGP Prefix-  
           SID.  Specifically, this document defines a BGP attribute known as   
           SID.  Specifically, this document defines a BGP attribute known as   
           the BGP Prefix-SID attribute and specifies the rules to originate,   
           the BGP Prefix-SID attribute and specifies the rules to originate,   
           receive, and handle error conditions for the attribute.              
   receive, and handle error conditions for the attribute.      
                                
           The BGP Prefix-SID attribute defined in this document can be 
attached                   The BGP Prefix-SID attribute defined in this 
document can be attached        
           to prefixes from Multiprotocol BGP labeled IPv4/IPv6 Unicast         
   to prefixes from Multiprotocol BGP labeled IPv4/IPv6 Unicast 
           ([RFC4760], [RFC8277]).  Address Family Identifier (AFI)/ Subsequent 
           ([RFC4760], [RFC8277]).  Usage of the BGP Prefix-SID attribute for   
           Address Family Identifier (SAFI) combinations.                  
other Address Family Identifier (AFI)/ Subsequent Address Family     
                           Identifier (SAFI) combinations is not defined herein 
but may be      
           Usage of the BGP Prefix-SID attribute for other AFI/SAFI 
combinations                   specified in future specifications.  
           is not defined herein but may be specified in future specifications. 
                
                                
           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc] describes example use cases   
           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc] describes example use cases   
           where the BGP Prefix-SID is used for the above AFI/SAFI 
combinations.                   where the BGP Prefix-SID is used for the above 
AFI/SAFI combinations.        
                                
           It should be noted that:                It should be noted that:     
                                
           o  A BGP Prefix-SID MAY be global between domains when the           
   o  A BGP Prefix-SID MAY be global between domains when the   
              interconnected domains agree on the SID allocation scheme.        
              interconnected domains agree on the SID allocation scheme.        
              Alternatively, when interconnecting domains, the ASBRs of each    
              Alternatively, when interconnecting domains, the ASBRs of each    
              domain will have to handle the advertisement of unique SIDs.  The 
              domain will have to handle the advertisement of unique SIDs.  The 
                                
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              if traffic-engineering within the SR domain is required, each 
node                      if traffic-engineering within the SR domain is 
required, each node        
              may be required to advertise its local SRGB in addition to the    
              may be required to advertise its local SRGB in addition to the    
              topological information.                topological information.  
                                
              This document assumes that BGP-LS is the preferred method for     
              This document assumes that BGP-LS is the preferred method for     
              collecting both peer segments (Peer SIDs) and SRGB information    
              collecting both peer segments (Peer SIDs) and SRGB information    
              through [RFC7752], [I-D.ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe], and  
              through [RFC7752], [I-D.ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe], and  
              [I-D.ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext].  However, as an        
              [I-D.ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext].  However, as an        
              optional alternative for the advertisement of the local SRGB      
              optional alternative for the advertisement of the local SRGB      
              without the topology nor the peer SIDs, hence without             
      without the topology nor the peer SIDs, hence without     
              applicability for TE, the Originator SRGB TLV of the prefix-SID   
              applicability for TE, the Originator SRGB TLV of the BGP Prefix-  
              attribute is specified in Section 3.2 of this document.           
      SID attribute is specified in Section 3.2 of this document.       
                                
              As defined in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], the label index  
              As defined in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], the label index  
              L_I is an offset into the SRGB.  Each BGP speaker derives its     
              L_I is an offset into the SRGB.  Each BGP speaker derives its     
              local MPLS label, L, by adding L_I to the start value of its own  
              local MPLS label, L, by adding L_I to the start value of its own  
              SRGB, and programs L in its MPLS dataplane as its incoming/local  
              SRGB, and programs L in its MPLS dataplane as its incoming/local  
              label for the prefix.  It should be noted that while SRGBs and    
              label for the prefix.  It should be noted that while SRGBs and    
              SIDs are advertised using 32-bit values, the derived label is     
              SIDs are advertised using 32-bit values, the derived label is     
              advertised in the 20 right-most bits.  See Section 4.1 for more   
              advertised in the 20 right-most bits.  See Section 4.1 for more   
              details.                details.  
                                
                                
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           The originator SRGB may only appear in a BGP Prefix-SID attribute    
           The originator SRGB may only appear in a BGP Prefix-SID attribute    
           attached to Labeled IPv4/IPv6 unicast prefixes ([RFC8277]).  It MUST 
           attached to Labeled IPv4/IPv6 unicast prefixes ([RFC8277]).  It MUST 
           be ignored when received for other BGP AFI/SAFI combinations.  Since 
           be ignored when received for other BGP AFI/SAFI combinations.  Since 
           the Label-Index TLV is required for IPv4/IPv6 prefix applicability,  
           the Label-Index TLV is required for IPv4/IPv6 prefix applicability,  
           the originator SRGB will be ignored if it is not specified 
consistent                   the originator SRGB will be ignored if it is not 
specified consistent        
           with Section 6.                 with Section 6.      
                                
        4.  Receiving BGP Prefix-SID Attribute          4.  Receiving BGP 
Prefix-SID Attribute  
                                
           A BGP speaker receiving a BGP Prefix-SID attribute from an EBGP      
           A BGP speaker receiving a BGP Prefix-SID attribute from an External  
           neighbor residing outside the boundaries of the SR domain MUST       
           BGP (EBGP) neighbor residing outside the boundaries of the SR domain 
           discard the attribute unless it is configured to accept the 
attribute                   MUST discard the attribute unless it is configured 
to accept the     
           from the EBGP neighbor.  A BGP speaker SHOULD log an error for       
           attribute from the EBGP neighbor.  A BGP speaker SHOULD log an error 
           further analysis when discarding an attribute.                  for 
further analysis when discarding an attribute.   
                                
        4.1.  MPLS Dataplane: Labeled Unicast           4.1.  MPLS Dataplane: 
Labeled Unicast   
                                
           A BGP session supporting the Multiprotocol BGP labeled IPv4 or IPv6  
           A BGP session supporting the Multiprotocol BGP labeled IPv4 or IPv6  
           Unicast ([RFC8277]) AFI/SAFI is required.               Unicast 
([RFC8277]) AFI/SAFI is required.    
                                
           The BGP Prefix-SID attribute MUST contain the Label-Index TLV and 
MAY                   The BGP Prefix-SID attribute MUST contain the Label-Index 
TLV and MAY        
           contain the Originator SRGB TLV.  A BGP Prefix-SID attribute 
received                   contain the Originator SRGB TLV.  A BGP Prefix-SID 
attribute received        
           without a Label-Index TLV MUST be considered as "invalid" by the     
           without a Label-Index TLV MUST be considered as "invalid" by the     
           receiving speaker.              receiving speaker.   
                                
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           When a BGP speaker receives a path from a neighbor with an "invalid" 
           When a BGP speaker receives a path from a neighbor with an "invalid" 
           or "conflicting" BGP Prefix-SID attribute or when a BGP speaker      
           or "conflicting" BGP Prefix-SID attribute or when a BGP speaker      
           receives a path from a neighbor with a BGP Prefix-SID attribute but  
           receives a path from a neighbor with a BGP Prefix-SID attribute but  
           is unable to process it (e.g., local policy disables the             
   is unable to process it (e.g., local policy disables the     
           functionality), it MUST ignore the BGP Prefix-SID attribute.  For 
the                   functionality), it MUST ignore the BGP Prefix-SID 
attribute.  For the        
           purposes of label allocation, a BGP speaker MUST assign a local 
(also                   purposes of label allocation, a BGP speaker MUST assign 
a local (also        
           called dynamic) label (non-SRGB) for such a prefix as per classic    
           called dynamic) label (non-SRGB) for such a prefix as per classic    
           Multiprotocol BGP labeled IPv4/IPv6 Unicast ([RFC8277]) operation.   
           Multiprotocol BGP labeled IPv4/IPv6 Unicast ([RFC8277]) operation.   
                                
           In the case of an "invalid" BGP Prefix-SID attribute, a BGP speaker  
           In the case of an "invalid" BGP Prefix-SID attribute, a BGP speaker  
           MUST follow to the error handling rules specified in Section 6.  A   
           MUST follow the error handling rules specified in Section 6.  A BGP  
           BGP speaker SHOULD log an error for further analysis.  In the case 
of                   speaker SHOULD log an error for further analysis.  In the 
case of a  
           a "conflicting" BGP Prefix-SID attribute, a BGP speaker SHOULD NOT   
           "conflicting" BGP Prefix-SID attribute, a BGP speaker SHOULD NOT     
           treat it as error and SHOULD propagate the attribute unchanged.  A   
           treat it as error and SHOULD propagate the attribute unchanged.  A   
           BGP Speaker SHOULD log a warning for further analysis, i.e., in the  
           BGP Speaker SHOULD log a warning for further analysis, i.e., in the  
           case the conflict is not due to a label index transition.            
   case the conflict is not due to a label index transition.    
                                
           When a BGP Prefix-SID attribute changes and transitions from         
   When a BGP Prefix-SID attribute changes and transitions from 
           "conflicting" to "acceptable", the BGP Prefix-SID attributes for     
           "conflicting" to "acceptable", the BGP Prefix-SID attributes for     
           other prefixes may also transition to "acceptable" as well.          
   other prefixes may also transition to "acceptable" as well.  
           Implementations SHOULD assure all impacted prefixes revert to using  
           Implementations SHOULD assure all impacted prefixes revert to using  
           the label indices corresponding to these newly "acceptable" BGP      
           the label indices corresponding to these newly "acceptable" BGP      
           Prefix-SID attributes.                  Prefix-SID attributes.       
                                
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           1     Label-Index     this document             1     Label-Index    
 this document  
           2     Deprecated      this document             2     Deprecated     
 this document  
           3     Originator SRGB this document             3     Originator 
SRGB this document  
           4-254 Unassigned                4-254 Unassigned     
           255   Reserved        this document             255   Reserved       
 this document  
                                
           This document also requests creation of the "BGP Prefix-SID Label-   
           This document also requests creation of the "BGP Prefix-SID Label-   
           Index TLV Flags" registry under the "Border Gateway Protocol (BGP)   
           Index TLV Flags" registry under the "Border Gateway Protocol (BGP)   
           Parameters" registry, Reference: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid.      
           Parameters" registry, Reference: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid.      
           Initially, this 16 bit flags registry will be empty.  Flag bits will 
           Initially, this 16 bit flags registry will be empty.  Flag bits will 
           be allocated First Come First Served (FCFS) consistent with the BGP- 
           be allocated First Come First Served (FCFS) consistent with the BGP  
           SID TLV Types registry.                 Prefix-SID TLV Types 
registry.       
                                
           Finally, this document requests creation of the "BGP Prefix-SID      
           Finally, this document requests creation of the "BGP Prefix-SID      
           Originator SRGB TLV Flags" registry under the "Border Gateway        
           Originator SRGB TLV Flags" registry under the "Border Gateway        
           Protocol (BGP) Parameters" registry, Reference: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-  
           Protocol (BGP) Parameters" registry, Reference: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-  
           prefix-sid.  Initially, this 16 bit flags registry will be empty.    
           prefix-sid.  Initially, this 16 bit flags registry will be empty.    
           Flag bits will be allocated First Come First Served (FCFS) 
consistent                   Flag bits will be allocated First Come First 
Served (FCFS) consistent        
           with the BGP-SID TLV Types registry.            with the BGP 
Prefix-SID TLV Types registry.  
                                
        8.  Manageability Considerations                8.  Manageability 
Considerations        
                                
           This document defines a BGP attribute to address use cases such as   
           This document defines a BGP attribute to address use cases such as   
           the one described in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc].  It is  
           the one described in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc].  It is  
           assumed that advertisement of the BGP Prefix-SID attribute is        
           assumed that advertisement of the BGP Prefix-SID attribute is        
           controlled by the operator in order to:                 controlled 
by the operator in order to:      
                                
           o  Prevent undesired origination/advertisement of the BGP Prefix-SID 
           o  Prevent undesired origination/advertisement of the BGP Prefix-SID 
              attribute.  By default, a BGP Prefix-SID attribute SHOULD NOT be  
              attribute.  By default, a BGP Prefix-SID attribute SHOULD NOT be  
                                
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           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing]               
[I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing]    
                      Filsfils, C., Previdi, S., Ginsberg, L., Decraene, B.,    
                      Filsfils, C., Previdi, S., Ginsberg, L., Decraene, B.,    
                      Litkowski, S., and R. Shakir, "Segment Routing            
              Litkowski, S., and R. Shakir, "Segment Routing    
                      Architecture", draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-15 (work 
                      Architecture", draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-15 (work 
                      in progress), January 2018.                             
in progress), January 2018.       
                                
           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls]                  
[I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls]       
                      Bashandy, A., Filsfils, C., Previdi, S., Decraene, B.,    
                      Bashandy, A., Filsfils, C., Previdi, S., Decraene, B.,    
                      Litkowski, S., and R. Shakir, "Segment Routing with MPLS  
                      Litkowski, S., and R. Shakir, "Segment Routing with MPLS  
                      data plane", draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-13    
                      data plane", draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-14    
                      (work in progress), April 2018.                         
(work in progress), June 2018.    
                                
           [RFC2119]  Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate       
           [RFC2119]  Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate       
                      Requirement Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119,                    
      Requirement Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119,    
                      DOI 10.17487/RFC2119, March 1997, <https://www.rfc-       
                      DOI 10.17487/RFC2119, March 1997, <https://www.rfc-       
                      editor.org/info/rfc2119>.                       
editor.org/info/rfc2119>. 
                                
           [RFC4271]  Rekhter, Y., Ed., Li, T., Ed., and S. Hares, Ed., "A      
           [RFC4271]  Rekhter, Y., Ed., Li, T., Ed., and S. Hares, Ed., "A      
                      Border Gateway Protocol 4 (BGP-4)", RFC 4271,             
              Border Gateway Protocol 4 (BGP-4)", RFC 4271,     
                      DOI 10.17487/RFC4271, January 2006, <https://www.rfc-     
                      DOI 10.17487/RFC4271, January 2006, <https://www.rfc-     
                      editor.org/info/rfc4271>.                       
editor.org/info/rfc4271>. 
                                
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                      Routing", draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-08    
                      Routing", draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-08    
                      (work in progress), May 2018.                           
(work in progress), May 2018.     
                                
           [I-D.ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe]                
[I-D.ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe]     
                      Previdi, S., Filsfils, C., Patel, K., Ray, S., and J.     
                      Previdi, S., Filsfils, C., Patel, K., Ray, S., and J.     
                      Dong, "BGP-LS extensions for Segment Routing BGP Egress   
                      Dong, "BGP-LS extensions for Segment Routing BGP Egress   
                      Peer Engineering", draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-  
                      Peer Engineering", draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-  
                      epe-15 (work in progress), March 2018.                    
      epe-15 (work in progress), March 2018.    
                                
           [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc]                  
[I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc]       
                      Filsfils, C., Previdi, S., Mitchell, J., Aries, E., and 
P.                              Filsfils, C., Previdi, S., Dawra, G., Aries, 
E., and P.   
                      Lapukhov, "BGP-Prefix Segment in large-scale data         
              Lapukhov, "BGP-Prefix Segment in large-scale data 
                      centers", draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-08 (work 
                      centers", draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-09 (work 
                      in progress), December 2017.                            
in progress), May 2018.   
                                
           [RFC3032]  Rosen, E., Tappan, D., Fedorkow, G., Rekhter, Y.,         
   [RFC3032]  Rosen, E., Tappan, D., Fedorkow, G., Rekhter, Y., 
                      Farinacci, D., Li, T., and A. Conta, "MPLS Label Stack    
                      Farinacci, D., Li, T., and A. Conta, "MPLS Label Stack    
                      Encoding", RFC 3032, DOI 10.17487/RFC3032, January 2001,  
                      Encoding", RFC 3032, DOI 10.17487/RFC3032, January 2001,  
                      <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc3032>.                
              <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc3032>.        
                                
           [RFC5004]  Chen, E. and S. Sangli, "Avoid BGP Best Path Transitions  
           [RFC5004]  Chen, E. and S. Sangli, "Avoid BGP Best Path Transitions  
                      from One External to Another", RFC 5004,                  
      from One External to Another", RFC 5004,  
                      DOI 10.17487/RFC5004, September 2007, <https://www.rfc-   
                      DOI 10.17487/RFC5004, September 2007, <https://www.rfc-   
                      editor.org/info/rfc5004>.                       
editor.org/info/rfc5004>. 
                                
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