Francis, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa
> On Jun 19, 2018, at 11:02 AM, Francis Dupont <francis.dup...@fdupont.fr> > wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20180616 > IETF LC End Date: 20180619 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready with Nits > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - 6 authors (formal limit is 5) > > - ToC page 2 and 11 page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements > > - 1 page 3: please introduce LSP and SR abbrevs (MPLS is well known > so does not need to be introduced). Remember that Abstract and body > are independent so not well known abbrevs should be intrduced at > first use in both. > > - 1 page 3: perfom -> perform > > - 2 page 4: IMHO you should add LAG in the list (it makes 7.2.2.1 easier > to follow). > > - 6 page 10: accomodate -> accommodate > > - 12 page 21: pelase check if Hendrickx is not Henderickx > > Regards > > francis.dup...@fdupont.fr > > PS: these points are very minor so don't fix them if you don't have > another reason to update the I-D. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
