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For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-yang-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180926 IETF LC End Date: 20181002 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: The yang model mixes config, state and actions, not like the others I know. But if the Yang experts have no concern I have none too... - 4 page 7: I notices the date of the model is 2018-06-30 when it was modified the 2018-08-31. I don't know the rule, perhaps the date is updated just before publication? Not an issue by itself. - action manual-switch-working page 30 and many others: please add a space before '{'. - A.1 page 46: the JSON is not valid (even it is readable) and I am afraid it is really JSON and not something JSON like. In detail: // does not begin comments in JSON (there are no comments in fact in JSON so IMHO it is not a real problem :-) extra commas (more an issue) - A.1 page 46: please add a space in "single":{ - same comments about A.2 pages 47 and 48, and A.3 pages 48-50 (with BTW two "single":{) - B page 50: Spain (ESP) -> Spain Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
