Erik, thanks for your review. Martin, thanks for your response. I agree that “checksum” is a misnomer here and don’t really understand why it was picked, but at least the text explains that it isn’t a checksum. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Oct 1, 2018, at 3:08 AM, Martin Bjorklund <m...@tail-f.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > Thank you for your review! Comments inline. > > Erik Kline <ek=40google....@dmarc.ietf.org > <mailto:ek=40google....@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: >> Reviewer: Erik Kline >> Review result: Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06 >> Reviewer: Erik Kline >> Review Date: 2018-06-30 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-28 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: ready >> >> Major issues: none >> >> Minor issues: none >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> Conceptually, the "checksum" isn't a checksum so much as just a unique >> identifier. The text in Section 3 text generally seems to acknowledge >> this (even using checksum in quotation marks), and so I'm left wondering >> whether "checksum" is really the best name. >> >> I've no strong opinion, just this observation, and nothing that should >> impede this document (I assume bike-shedding may have already occurred). > > Yes; this used to be called just an "identifier", but people found it > confusing and it was always referred to as the checksum... > >> Section 2, item 4 "more than one datastores" -> "more than one datastore". > > Fixed. > >> Section 4, I believe ietf-datastores reference can be updated to RFC 8342, >> if I understand things correctly. > > Fixed. > >> Section 4, Author list entry for Rob Wilton lacks "mailto:"; before the >> email address. > > Fixed. > > > > /martin > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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