Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Ian, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Oct 5, 2018, at 8:37 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > Hi Elwyn, > > Good catch on the points below. They’re fixed in the new version. > > Thanks, > Ian > >> On 4. Oct 2018, at 17:31, Elwyn Davies <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies >> Review result: Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05 >> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies >> Review Date: 2018-10-04 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 >> >> Summary: >> Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There >> are a >> couple of remaining trivial nits. >> >> Major issues: >> None. >> >> Minor issues: >> None. >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/ >> >> s10: I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made >> (sorry): OLD: in the table at >> https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes >> table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS >> >> _______________________________________________ >> dhcwg mailing list >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg >> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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