Francis, thanks for your review. Peter, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Oct 11, 2018, at 2:38 PM, Peter Psenak <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Francis, > > I have included your comments in the new version (8) that has been published. > > thanks, > Peter > > On 11/10/18 10:27 , Francis Dupont wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt >> Reviewer: Francis Dupont >> Review Date: 20181005 >> IETF LC End Date: 20181010 >> IESG Telechat date: unknown >> >> Summary: Ready >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> I reviewed the version 06 but the version 07 is available so I am >> trying to update my comments to the last version: >> - Abstract page 1: add "(LLS)" after "link-local signalling" >> >> - Requirement Language: usually it is in its own section in the body. >> I leave this to the RFC Editor, i.e. if it should be moved (s)he >> will do this. >> >> - ToC page 3 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments >> >> - 1 page 2: in theory you should introduce the LSA abbrev but as the >> whole document is about OSPF IMHO there is no strict requirement to >> introduce OSPF specific common abbrevs... >> >> - 1 page 3: add "(LLS)" after "link-local signalling" >> (note the Abstract is independent so the LLS abbrev should be introduced >> twice and at its first use). >> >> - Authors' page 7: BE -> Belgium (for consistency with other addresses) >> >> Regards >> >> [email protected] >> . >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
