Thanks for catching these - will fix. > On 21 Nov 2018, at 01:21, Alissa Cooper <[email protected]> wrote: > > Meral, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. > > Alissa > >> On Nov 13, 2018, at 7:22 PM, Meral Shirazipour >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >> wrote: >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08 >> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >> Review Date: 2018-11-13 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-13 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-11-21 >> >> >> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I >> have some comments. >> Major issues: >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> -[Page 21], last row in Table, "types are are omitted"----->"types are >> omitted" >> -[Page 21], last row in Table, "If the data type is are omitted"----->"If >> the data type is omitted" >> >> -[Page 22], Section 7.5, "collection and and"---->"collection and" >> -[Page 37], "may have be split"---->"may have been split" >> -[Page 37], "may have be sent"---->"may have been sent" >> >> -[Page 38], "choronological"--->"chronological" >> -[Page 63], "schema to to read"---->"schema to read" >> >> Best Regards, >> Meral >> --- >> Meral Shirazipour >> Ericsson Research >> www.ericsson.com >> <http://www.ericsson.com/>_______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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