Matthew, thanks for your review. Pascal, thanks for your response. I entered an ABSTAIN ballot position, which does not block publication of the document.
Alissa > On Oct 26, 2018, at 9:47 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Many thanks, Matthew. > > This will be fixed in the next update of the draft, already fixed in > bitbucket. > > Take care, > > Pascal > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Matthew Miller <[email protected]> >> Sent: jeudi 25 octobre 2018 20:02 >> To: [email protected] >> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; draft-ietf-detnet-problem- >> [email protected] >> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07 >> >> Reviewer: Matthew Miller >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: >> Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller >> Review Date: 2018-10-25 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03 >> IESG Telechat date: N/A >> >> Summary: >> >> Ready to publish as an Informational Draft, though there are nits that ought >> to >> be addressed before publication. >> >> Major issues: NONE >> >> Minor issues: NONE >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> * In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "an" >> should be "an" in the phrase "a tunnel between and ingress and an egress >> router". >> >> * In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "of" >> should be "or" in the phrase "... the path is end-to-end of a tunnel.". >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
