Peter, thanks for your review. Erik, thanks for the updates. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Nov 20, 2018, at 4:06 PM, Erik Wilde <[email protected]> wrote: > > hello. > > thanks, peter, for your review! > > On 2018-11-20 17:21, Peter Yee wrote: >> Page 8, Section 7: RFC 2223 requires you do more than provide an ellipsis >> here. >> You might want to consider what makes sense. Perhaps a discussion of what >> happens to a client that obtains a maliciously formatted service-desc or even >> an errant service-desc. While a human might be able to see through problems >> in >> a "service-doc", it's quite possible that a machine will want to take >> precautions about handling the received data and acting upon it. > > thanks for the suggestion! > https://github.com/dret/I-D/commit/3f065e662ccd66419c92246a2bba9bd8c5127ade > adds security considerations. > >> Nits/editorial comments: >> Page 1, Note to Readers: Presumably this section will be removed prior to >> publication. > > done in > https://github.com/dret/I-D/commit/f5e8c10f4a9400d55a867d64b8aef9846ae4106b > >> Page 3, 4th full paragraph, 1st sentence: Delete the comma after >> "consumption" >> and delete the "for" following that. >> Page 5, Section 3.3, 1st paragraph, 1st section: change "of" to "between". >> Put >> the section references in parentheses. >> Page 5, Section 3.3, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert "a" before "better". > > addressed in > https://github.com/dret/I-D/commit/cc902371fff59b96d3185e643522fe8f1462d042 > > i think with these changes in the draft i have addressed the comments in this > review. i have posted a new version of the draft that includes the changes > mentioned here. > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-wilde-service-link-rel-07 > > thanks again and kind regards, > > dret. > > -- > erik wilde | mailto:[email protected] | > | http://dret.net/netdret | > | http://twitter.com/dret | > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
