Thanks Christer. I entered a No Objection ballot and flagged your review there since I haven’t seen a response to it.
Alissa > On Jan 4, 2019, at 7:30 AM, Christer Holmberg > <[email protected]> wrote: > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-mile-xmpp-grid-09 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review Date: 2019-01-04 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-14 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The document is well written, easy to read, and technically I have no > issues. However, as shown below, I do have some questions for clarifications. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > > Q1: There is no explanation of what kind of security-related information is > distributed. What kind of security? I assume it is some kind of application > security, and not XMPP security. > > Q2: Is there a reason why XMPP-Grid is only defined for security-related > information? Isn’t XMPP-Grid a way of distributing ANY type on information in > a > secure manner? > > Q3: It is not clear to me what XMPP-Grid provides that “normal” secure XMPP > doesn’t. Is XMPP-Grid only an architecture, using standard XMPP components? If > so, I think that should be made more clear. > > Q4: While section 8 does reference RFC 6120 for the usage of TLS, I can’t find > any references to other security considerations in RFC 6120. Is everything in > section 8 XMPP-Grid specific? > > Q5: Section 4 talks about a “typical” workflow. I assume that means there > could > be others? > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Q6: The document talks about using XMPP-Grid for distributing > “security-relevant”/”security-related” information. I suggest using consistent > terminology. > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
