Thanks, Joel, for taking the time to review this! Barry
On Thu, Aug 8, 2019 at 10:23 PM Joel Halpern via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-klensin-idna-unicode-review-02 > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2019-08-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-30 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: THis document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard > > This reviewer found the document quite readable and clear about what > it was > doing (with one minor issue noted below.) The reviewer does not have > the > background to evaluate whether the technical substance is correct or > incorrect, and leaves that to the community review. The document is > quite > persuasive. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: > I would like to see a little more explicit text in section 3.2. It > was not > until I reached the IANA considerations (section 8) that I realized > that > section 3.2 intended to mandate that the IESG create and where > applicable > use a broad review team for the new code point review. I think a > sentence > or so along the lines of "Creation of this team when needed is a new > responsibility placed on the IESG by this document." would have helped. > > Nits/editorial comments: N/A > > >
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