I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tls-grease-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190803 IETF LC End Date: 20190812 IESG Telechat date: 20190822 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 8 page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 5 page 7: I have a concern about your use of the term random. In fact even it is a security document here random is just plain English (vs any crypto meaning). Constraints seems to be: * coverage: the set of used values should not be small * privacy: fingerprinting should not be easy I do not propose any solution: just follow recommendations of the security directorate in the case this point is a problem. Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Genemail@example.com https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art