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For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190918 IETF LC End Date: 20190925 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1.1 page 3: add RFC 8174 with RFC 2119 - 3 page 4 figure 1 and many other: if you have some control on page formatting please try to put short figure on one page, and to not leave for instance a section title alone at the end of a page. Note that anyway the RFC Editor should fix that... - 3.1 page 5: possible TCVCIS -> TSVCIS? - 5 page 16: spurious space / bad indent at " No SDP negotiations are required." - 6 page 16: errored -> ? - 9 page 17: the RFC Editor Considerations just says that the RFC Editor may remove it? Looks like a place-holder... Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
