Paul, thanks for your review. Carlos, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Nov 1, 2019, at 8:06 AM, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Dear Paul, > > We've just posted a new revision (-14) addressing all your comments. > > Thanks! > > Carlos > > On Fri, Oct 18, 2019 at 1:07 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > Dear Paul, > > Thanks for the review. > > We will fix the outdated references in the next version of the doc > (addressing also other directorate reviews that might arrive). > > Carlos > > On Sat, Oct 12, 2019 at 8:38 PM Paul Kyzivat <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13 > Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat > Review Date: 2019-10-12 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14 > IESG Telechat date: ? > > Summary: > > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should > be fixed before publication. > > General: > > I found that I lack the subject matter expertise to meaningfully review > this document. I read it carefully, along with one of the references. > But it appeared that I would need to internalize quite a number of other > references before it would be possible to really follow this. > > I did review it for form - the document is well written. (Most documents > that I review have at least a few problems with form.) > > IdNits returns a couple of outdated references that should be cleaned up: > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of > draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-17 > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of > draft-ietf-rtgwg-atn-bgp-01 > > I have no other comments. > > > -- > Special Issue "Beyond 5G Evolution": > https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g > <https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g> > > > > -- > Special Issue "Beyond 5G Evolution": > https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g > <https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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