Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review Date: 2020-06-16
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is basically ready but has one minor issue, described in
the review.

Minor issues:

In the last paragraph of Section 4 there are a number of non-normative may,
should, must. I believe the last "should" at least could be normative:

>  Also, implementations should have validation to assure
>  that there is no recursion amongst nested routing policies.

(More of a question than an issue) I was surprised that all but one references
were considered normative. Is that common to consider the RFC that appear in
the model as normative references for the document?

Note that for the version reviewed, the Yang Validation for
draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15 failed: err : Data model "ietf-if-extensions"
not found.



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