Thank You, Alissa! Regards,
Christer -----Original Message----- From: Alissa Cooper <ali...@cooperw.in> Sent: torstai 13. elokuuta 2020 3.51 To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> Cc: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmb...@ericsson.com>; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel....@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; mmu...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21 Brian, thanks for your review. Christer, thanks for addressing Brian’s comments. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jul 13, 2020, at 4:51 PM, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > Thanks Christer, that all looks good to me, > > Regards > Brian > > On 13-Jul-20 20:58, Christer Holmberg wrote: >> Hi Brian, >> >> Thank You for the review! Please see inline. >> >> >> Nits: >> ----- >> >>>> 4.1. MSRP URI >>>> .... >>>> transport /= "dc" >>>> >>>> I see that RFC7977 takes a slightly different approach to updating the >>>> ABNF: >>>> >>>> transport = "tcp" / "ws" / 1*ALPHANUM >>>> >>> The advantage of listing out >>> >>> transport = "tcp" / "ws" / "dc" / 1*ALPHANUM >>> >>> would be that the reader sees the full list. >> >> The MMUSIC WG has previously decided to take the approach of only writing >> the new value, using the "/=" format. >> >> --- >> >>>> ; Add "dc" to existing transports per [RFC4975] >>>> >>>> I suggest >>>> >>>> ; Add "dc" to existing transports per Section 9 of >>>> [RFC4975] >> >> Will modify as suggested. >> >> --- >> >>>> 4.6. Session Closing >>>> >>>> The SDP answerer must ensure that no dcmap or dcsa attributes are >>>> present in the SDP answer if no corresponding attributes are >>>> present in the received SDP offer. >>>> >>>> Should that be MUST? >> >> The reason for "must" is that is referring to generic data channel SDP O/A >> procedures. >> >> I suggest to remove the paragraph. >> >> --- >> >>>> B2BUA >>>> >>>> Define the acronym please. >> >> We normally don't do that in MMUSIC specifications. Also, it is on the IETF >> list of well-known acronyms. >> >> Having said that, I am fine to enhance it on first occurrence: 'Back-to-Back >> User Agent (B2BUA)' >> >> --- >> >>>> 9.2. Subprotocol Identifier MSRP >>>> >>>> A reference to this document is added to the subprotocol >>>> identifier "msrp" in the "WebSocket Subprotocol Name Registry" >>>> >>>> s/this document/RFCXXXX/ >> >> Will modify as suggested. >> >> --- >> >>>> 11. CHANGE LOG >>>> >>>> Mark this section for deletion by the RFC Editor >> >> I think the RFC Editor will delete it by default, but we can add explicit >> text. >> >> Regards, >> >> Christer >> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
